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Very cool you could improve on the fuselage but still good 
8/11
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Solid 7/11
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As my band director would say, I’m going to be really picky because I’m a Luftwaffe buff.
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The Bf 109E series had the cannon in the spinner omitted for weight reasons.
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I would also recommend adding the frame of the canopy and the struts on the horizontal stabilizer, along with making the tail wheel more pronounced (as the only Bf 109 variant that had a retractable tailwheel was the Bf 109K series) And also add the radiators on the wings if they would be visible at that angle.
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Concerning livery, I would move the insignias on the wings more towards the fuselage, and shift the insigna on the fuselage just a little bit back. If you’re trying to make a specific plane, make sure to add the unit code too. I see the “A4” on the fuselage. And the swastika could be a bit smaller.
Overall, I would rate this an 8/11. The background is amazing, and one of the only major things I would recommend is adding shading. Shading really makes people appreciate artwork. Good job!
#yapping
(sorry about the rant…)
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In my defence I drew this while bored in class so I didn’t have many reference images, already threw away the drawing but thanks for the feedback!
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You shouldn’t throw it away it’s nice dude 
we are not criticising it ok? Just feedbacks
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Nah not because of you, I just don’t have space for it in my backpack (if I put it anywhere it’ll just cripple) so I have no reason to keep it. Sorry if you misunderstood.
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